Breezestar-Hawkclan

[redwhisker]

BASIC INFO

Name: Breezestar
Age: 30 moons
Clan: HawkClan
Rank: Leader
Brief Description: Dark brown tabby tom with bright amber eyes.

APPEARANCE & PERSONALITY

Image: BREEZESTAR
Looks in Detail:
Breezestar is a large dark brown tabby tom with bright amber eyes. Because he is the age of a warrior and that's really what he should be, his towering over all other apprentices is attributed to that. But he is taller and more broad-shouldered then even toms of his own age. He is owner to unusually large paws and and unusually long tail. When he was apprentice-aged, he found it hard to hunt because of his overly large size. He crashed through the forest and cracked twigs and scared all of the prey away. Now that he's older, and grown into his oversized body, he's a decent hunter. The larger pads on his feet help him to stay quiet in the shadows, making him a true Hawkclan cat.

Personality:
Breezestar, he's a strange one to say in the least. He isn't the kind of cat who is hard, or too soft on anyone, to say in the least he is very interested in everything and questions almost everything. He's talked to plenty of snakes, birds, and all sorts of canines to know how different cultures. Breezestar is like a professor in his own, and most of all, he speaks to where everyone can laugh, he makes their day brighter, and it almost seems like, he hasn't realized that he lives as a warrior and world is cruel.

People don't see Breezestar using his fire power often, most of the time, he's chatting with birds around that know him, and tend to stay their distance to not get hunted. Breezestar is well aware he can hear the animals that he hunts, but it doesn't bother him because it's a way of life, it made no difference to any cat who can't hear them, so why now. Breezestar is more or less afraid to use his fire power, though properly trained by his father. Breezestar, spends his time, learning more about everything, to make sure his clan is safe.

HISTORY & RP SAMPLE

History: Breezefang was born a EagleClan cat, but his stay there was short-lived. He doesn't know how, but he ended up in Hawkclan. He, his brother and his sister were taken in as fosterkits to a queen whose kits had recently become apprentices. She was always very real with all of them. They knew from the time they could understand that they weren't born Hawkclan cats. Breezestar didn't feel truly unsure of himself before Tawnypaw died, murdered by a rogue. Breezestar was probably closest to Tawnypaw. Snakestripe and Breezestar could never really get along. Tawnypaw was the glue that held the three of them together, When she was murdered, Breezestar fell apart, and he hasn't been exactly the same since. He still remembers the morning she went missing. She hadn't been in the apprentice's den and her scent trail led to the river's edge. Blood had been spilled and Tawnypaw's scent was everywhere. Her body was never found. A rogue's scent was also there. It was declared that Tawnypaw had been murdered and that the rogue was her killer. Since then, he's felt as if he should know who their parents were so they could be told that their daughter was dead. He wanted to see if they would even care. He's always held a sort of secret hatred in regards to the parents that he's never met. He loathes the fact that they didn't keep their kits.
RP Sample:

As the darkness was taking over summer's body, she tried to fight it. When Maple threw summer off, her eyes changed to green and then back to yellow. Atleast summer was trying to get back but it kept pushing her back. Well I thought that would change your mind. But now you have to die. The darkness said. All of a sudden summer fell to the ground on her side.

Summer was in her mind and so was Morita, the darkness. Now she knew who it was. Someone she had met a long time ago. He was a spirit that would take over her and she never knew. I should of known it was you! she hissed at him.
Ah but you didn't and guess what, I was the one who was helping you out and your sister should be dead now. Morita said. Summer looked at the cat and growled. I swear if you kill my sister you will die by me! She yowled and ran at him. Summer's razor sharp claws sliced Morita. He looked at her and laughed, I can't die he said. Summer looked at him and tackled him. She bit his neck and started to slice it. After a while he faded away.

Eyes opened and the color was green. Summer had finally gotten control but she didn't know for how long. Maple, It was Morita she said and tears started to go..

OOC INFO

OOC Name: Redwhisker
How You Found Us: Wttm
Other Characters: Just this one so far
Anything Else: nope.

[Amber]

Your application has been
DENIED

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In order to properly edit your application, please take into consideration the following points.

• First, Birds of Prey is a semi-realistic role-play site. This means that the cats in these Clans do no have special powers, such as talking to other species and "fire power". Please remove these from his personality.
  
  
• Second, Breezestar's history is really sketchy. Even if he doesn't know, you should state who his parents and siblings are, and the events leading up to his sister's death, if only for the benefit of the admins and members. Also, you should describe how, why, and when he became deputy, and then leader. Also remember, for a deputy to be chosen, they have to have trained at least one apprentice.

Once you have tended to these issues, your form will be re-evaluated, and a decision shall be made from there.[/font]